| #1 RockForce[117673] |
| spider-mtc-tf042.proxy.aol.com |
CynicalKane: gogogo
ohhh 1st! |
| #2 Black_Abyss[117675] |
| 02-092.057.popsite.net |
| 2nd |
| #3 lebman[117677] |
| Ottawa-ppp110515.sympatico.ca |
| 3rd |
| #4 {DD}Fatboy[117678] |
| adsl-66-124-232-193.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| no one cares about 4th, but.... 4th! |
| #5 SiG.[117680] |
| host-216-77-217-174.fll.bellsouth.net |
I love this story man. You have skills.
That thumping thing scares me :(
GOGO May 26! |
| #6 User14[117681] |
| spider-ntc-tc031.proxy.aol.com |
| I sense naughtiness from travesdain, that thud is good to keep the suspense, i love your writing. KEEP EM COMING |
| #7 vincible[117685] |
| roam155-218.student.harvard.edu |
| Good stuff again. Especially the airport scenes. |
| #8 real[117688] |
| 113.d.004.mel.iprimus.net.au |
yay, i've been waiting all week for this part
very nice, as with the rest. |
| #9 Kane[117696] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
To number 8:
=D
thanks for your comments, they keep me writing =] |
#10  [117697] |
| StCatherines-ppp109165.sympatico.ca |
love it. Your writing is good, especially your dialogue.
This is a really great series, best fiction series since Praetor's I'd say.
I'm going to slap down another 8. Wish I could rate by .5s tho. |
| #11 Adrenaling[117698] |
| CPE014100005949.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| shit kane, ur consistent. all 8's on ur reports so far. =] |
| #12 SiG.[117701] |
| mia-this02.firn.edu |
WELL I dunno about progamer.. but this would make a badass book.
cant wait for the next one =] |
| #13 Dragonsven[117702] |
| 170.158.213.70 |
Nice Kane...solid 9. Bastard fan fic limit. 8 is so bm.
-Sven |
| #14 SarcasticSage[117746] |
| isdn-208-201-236-22.sonic.net |
| Sadly I find that this one is an eight just for one main problem >.< description error. BM kane :( saying that Jon is unconcious then naming him lifeless in every repetitive sense of the word. Come on you know better than that >.< |
| #15 UltimateFire[117748] |
| spider-ntc-td011.proxy.aol.com |
| Damn these are good. I only wish that there was more. I'm dieing to know some actual storyline :D |
| #16 Adrenaling[117751] |
| CPE014100005949.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| love it ckane. looking forward to some of your future works. as a matter of fact, im looking backward too, to some of your older parts to this series. =] |
| #17 Puma5000[117772] |
| 216-55-164-139.dsl.san-diego.abac.net |
This story is one of the things I most look forward to on this site. I mean, when I saw [}agomar's HW report, I said to myself "I'll read it later" but when your name comes up, I go there right away (hopes he doesn't get ip-banned). Just wondering, how long have you been writing and how much education in literature have you had? (or did you just take AP english in high school and read a lot?)
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| #18 Kane[117778] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
This is actually my first real attempt at a story. I've made several half-hearted attempts at one that didn't go very far (like the box story that I posted here). l don't take honors/AP english because I don't have the grades to get in =[ but high school english is fucking worthless anyway. And yeah, I read a lot.
Stephen King said that "if you don't have the time to read, you don't have the time or tools to write." |
| #19 ThePalisade[117782] |
| 170.158.213.70 |
| My mom said, "Read or no allowance." I read. |
#20  [117891] |
| user33.net181.fl.sprint-hsd.net |
| Your mom makes you read Kane? Godly! |
| #21 Kane[117912] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
Spelling lesson #1:
K-A-N-E, does, in fact, NOT spell "ThePalisade"
=o |
| #22 Puma5000[117927] |
| 216-55-164-139.dsl.san-diego.abac.net |
Just a completely useless question, wtf kind of movie was citizen kane anyway. When I try to picture it I come up with a Bruce Lee in Kung Fu type of thing
:) |
| #23 HarvKilljoy[118085] |
| 24-197-205-220.man.mn.charter.com |
I'm only posting to test my IP address from my box here at the office... but hey, it was a cool story, albeit a bit short, and the part about the wheat/corn discrepancy; unnerving... I'll live.
HARV
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| #24 IP[132394] |
| cpe.atm2-0-1111067.0x503fd2b6.boanxx9.customer.tele.dk |
Doh
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