| #1 mattzarella[120598] |
| spider-wm011.proxy.aol.com |
| wow a report |
| #2 mattzarella[120599] |
| spider-wm011.proxy.aol.com |
you've improved a great deal since your last piece of shit ;[
the pictures are still the same, which is good - i have nothing to complain about seeing as you used borders and collages (though some text thrown inbetween and around the pictures would make for the better)
but your writing is HORRID. grammar mistakes/awkward writing/lack of humor makes this a bland, uninteresting read. while you are somewhat informative, your words lack the pizazz and flash that the better reports have. as much as i may regret it, the next time you write a report, send it to me. i'll proofread it, as to prevent the awful wrong useage of "their, they're, there"
mattzarella@grungerock.com
still, much better than last time. |
| #3 Amoeba_Boy[120600] |
| spider-wb014.proxy.aol.com |
| I havent even begun reading it, but I can say something screwed up. You either had no text, or it was whiter cuz I didnt see any while pics were loading |
| #4 mattzarella[120601] |
| spider-wm011.proxy.aol.com |
| you have to let the background load, idiot |
| #5 mattzarella[120602] |
| spider-wm011.proxy.aol.com |
oh, i forgot a few things:
on some of your later pics, you had no alt text
the joke at the beginning is tasteless and really unfunny when typed and not said aloud |
| #6 mattzarella[120603] |
| spider-wm011.proxy.aol.com |
ok, one last comment :(
when you spoke about not knowing much about hasudrone, i really hope you were kidding |
| #7 Amoeba_Boy[120604] |
| spider-wb014.proxy.aol.com |
ok sorry, i screwed up, bg didnt load =[
This was about on par with your other reports, good pics, ok writing, and the grammer of a tree frog. Grammer/spelling have progressively gotten better, but I can still find several just from reading it, not going in depth.
I was also confused by the game, unless I missed something they're fighting in greens natural and suddenly yellow expoed all over the map. go more in depth on the game, tell upgrades and expos. Makes it a lot easier to read |
#8  [120606] |
| 12-222-61-61.client.insightBB.com |
Writing was a bit clunky, but it was a fun game and the pictures were nice. I think the background was a bit bright for white text.
7 |
| #9 Peon[120608] |
| dt050n2c.tampabay.rr.com |
| omfg praise the lord. now to read |
| #10 titans-thesoby[120611] |
| d-207-5-252-62.s-way.com |
| I can change BG if you peeps want. |
| #11 Disturbed[120616] |
| agent.lisco.com |
I read your alt text and I started to read the game, but having to highlight every other paragraph to read it is very annoying. What's the deal with all the sex jokes? You just starting puberty or what?
Some of the pics had what would be the equivalent of white space in them, i.e., two or three medium size pics in a fucking huge area, with just the background between them. Not the best use of space.
Your writing bored me so I didn't read it. Just looked at pics and alt text. |
| #12 LoZeR-X[120623] |
| mke-65-29-130-160.wi.rr.com |
| It wasnt that good. And sadly, this is the last thing I see before I take a vow of PC chasity and cut myself off from the Blizzard RTS world. GG NO RE Mattzarella, imp, dag, fungee, fatal, dry, and anyone else cool I missed like keanu or sometimes kain.. :( |
#13  [120624] |
| StCatherines-ppp109084.sympatico.ca |
A couple things made me not give this a 7 :[. Poor writing ( though it's improving ), bad spelling, so-so collages, VERY poor color choice, very bad jokes. You're very close to being a solid gold reporter, just stop making the same little errors!
And good luck with your fokes :P |
| #14 [120625] |
| 12-222-61-61.client.insightBB.com |
| haha, dag gave something a lower rating than me... i must be slipping |
| #15 :+:SlipKnoT:+:[120626] |
| atiy44hsy452e.ab.hsia.telus.net |
| Better than your fucking horrible reps you post. |
| #16 mattzarella[120627] |
| spider-wo032.proxy.aol.com |
that sucks a superb amount of ass there, marcus :(
if you read this, come back sometime and pay us a visit, if you're planning on leaving for good :(
god, a shitty report and people disappearing. and fake dying at that ;[
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| #17 :+:SlipKnoT:+:[120628] |
| atiy44hsy452e.ab.hsia.telus.net |
| Gj #17 rofl |
| #18 plus2longsword[120631] |
| asc8-grr-ip060.wmis.net |
| your graphical ability is tremendous..but the writing could be better. you remind of one of those guys in the gym with like 21 inch arms, and 18 inch legs, they should quit working their arms and do nothing but leg work..in your case, pay attention to the teacher in English class. |
| #19 IBashar[120632] |
| coyotte-e.insat.com |
| Gas owns ! |
| #20 IBashar[120633] |
| coyotte-e.insat.com |
#19 : I don't believe in English teachers. Just read ! Read a lot (of BRs for instance), pay attention to the writing and LEARN !!
Anyway, nice blur on your text. |
| #21 Casper...[120636] |
| spc-isp-tor-58-18-261.sprint.ca |
| hf @ remedial english 101 |
| #22 TR-Keithster[120639] |
| pm41-114-90.worldpath.net |
| I didn't get any text though, and I let the whole page load. But the pics weren't bad. |
| #23 CaughtNaked[120643] |
| waf-dc27-233.rasserver.net |
| the white text started to hurt my eyes |
| #24 OMFG[120649] |
| proxy.ia2.marketscore.com |
| Stop using there instead of their!!!!!! |
| #25 Kaby[120656] |
| 12-248-23-46.client.attbi.com |
| well like everyone else said, work on your writing because your pictures are fine. Sure you could work on flash intros and whatnot but still your writing needs work. besides grammatical errors it was a nice report. |
| #26 RockForce[120657] |
| spider-mtc-tf044.proxy.aol.com |
| And where instead of were |
| #27 IcE-Dark_Lord[120658] |
| 27.PPP.NBY1.ENOREO.ON.CA |
| Nice report, finaly a REPORT!!! funny alt text if you have a sick mind (I do) |
| #28 Amoeba_Boy[120659] |
| spider-mtc-tb083.proxy.aol.com |
| and know instead of now |
| #29 Pr0be[120660] |
| spider-te022.proxy.aol.com |
| And terran instead of pizza |
| #30 mattzarella[120661] |
| spider-mtc-tf054.proxy.aol.com |
| titans - user8889@aol.com for the email now, if you were even listening to me the first time :( |
| #31 IBashar[120676] |
| coyotte-e.insat.com |
mattzarella : is your offer available to everybody ? I've no time for BRing for now but who knows ... maybe one day.
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| #32 mattzarella[120678] |
| spider-mtc-tj061.proxy.aol.com |
| for the next month i'll be at that email above and off of bnet; so notify me if you write a br after that, and i'd be happy to :) |
| #33 ZerG~LinG[120830] |
| p411-060.ppp.get2net.dk |
Hey Titans, back from holiday to comment on your br :O
A bit bright bg, no biggie. Bad writing, read other reports, thats how I learned english :[
Okaish pics, just keep it up and practice your writing.
Btw let me guess, on your report card your lowest score was in... English? |
| #34 badme[122049] |
| pcp01773918pcs.norstn01.pa.comcast.net |
| Ouch. Good call Ling |
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