| #1 bogus_food[125032] |
| pool-151-204-149-194.ny325.east.verizon.net |
just so ya know, this is my first map. I wrote this when i first came here to br.com. My account is infested_salmon
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| #2 bogus_food[125033] |
| pool-151-204-149-194.ny325.east.verizon.net |
ahh yeah the html worked perfectly
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| #3 corpus[125034] |
| 12-216-216-153.client.mchsi.com |
| #1, starcraft? what is this game with terren and minerals? WCIII! |
| #4 mulla-the-bum[125035] |
| spider-tm063.proxy.aol.com |
all the gramm(E)r mistakes confused my brain
there i spelled it right |
| #5 zeon[125036] |
| CPE014100005949.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| #3, shut up. a lot of ppl here still like to read SC reports. |
| #6 DarkRider[125038] |
| 198.134.2.2 |
| wow@grammar |
| #7 me[125039] |
| dial-28-15.ots.utexas.edu |
| single digits!I'm on a roll lately |
| #8 Mr.Puddles[125040] |
| netcache-2004.public.lawson.webtv.net |
| sounds like ur one big newb to me |
| #9 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[125046] |
| h000393853294.ne.client2.attbi.com |
it is spelled GRAMMAR
GRAMMAR
GRAMMAR
GRAMMAR
GRAMMAR
GRAMMAR
GRAMMAR |
| #10 vincible[125049] |
| 1Cust26.tnt17.sfo8.da.uu.net |
| Give it up Time. Sadly, some people are doomed never to spell "grammar" correctly in their lifetimes. Except maybe unintentionally after a typo. |
| #11 otherOne[125057] |
| ool-182e5490.dyn.optonline.net |
err...its a first report so I guess it was a nice try. Don't use bold next time
4-5 |
| #12 Decay[125065] |
| 206.10.109.41 |
WTF?! Why wont it put what i want???
Ok, put <img ".......">
sorry for the confusion :/ |
| #13 Decay[125066] |
| 206.10.109.41 |
OK FUCK IT!!!
JV must not have completely removed html tags from comments or something. Ok...
Put a src after your img and before the = |
| #14 Decay[125067] |
| 206.10.109.41 |
BTW, #12-16!!!! |
| #15 mulla-the-bum[125071] |
| cache-dc05.proxy.aol.com |
what are you mad at time you got a 4 on your fan fic
thats much better than your usual 1 |
#16  [125072] |
| 12-222-61-61.client.insightBB.com |
| This report would have been better had the picture worked... wait... no it wouldn't have... :P |
| #17 demon_blade3[125077] |
| dsc05.ivn-ca-0-121.rasserver.net |
| i havent played starcraft in like, 6 years (how fuggin old is it?) and i never got brood war. i'm so ashamed my collection is missing 1 blizzard game! *sob* anyway good start (i know my first three br's were crappy...oh wait i've only made two. *smack*) |
| #18 demon_blade3[125078] |
| dsc05.ivn-ca-0-121.rasserver.net |
| this thing got a three and my piece of crap br of C&C renegade got a six? at least he tried to put in pics! and it was far more interesting than me boasting about sniping off 12 guys in a row. and TIME, if you watch that show, you've officially passed the "gay test" |
| #19 demon_blade3[125079] |
| dsc05.ivn-ca-0-121.rasserver.net |
| and i promise i'll stop posting but.......in one day he has more comments than my other BR WITH pics, AND a rater commenting. it's a damned conspiracy! thats it for me for today :P |
| #20 corpus[125080] |
| 12-216-216-153.client.mchsi.com |
| wow #5 you need to get laid or somthing, relax, joke ,gees. |
| #21 corpus[125081] |
| 12-216-216-153.client.mchsi.com |
| and besides this one wasnt worth reading anyway. |
| #22 bogus_food[125082] |
| pool-151-204-149-194.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| just so you know, im only on lesson 5 on html. and, this is my first br. I read brs only for about a week. Chill out. |
| #23 bogus_food[125083] |
| pool-151-204-149-194.ny325.east.verizon.net |
Someone give me more pointers!
New people like me need them. |
| #24 c.FA)Chill[125084] |
| 209.226.15.250 |
Learn HTML.
Or at least use Geocities Pagebuilder or something. |
| #25 mick[125086] |
| 1Cust167.tnt8.bne1.da.uu.net |
| test your tags and shit offline, so they won't break on you. |
| #26 bogus_food[125092] |
| pool-151-204-149-194.ny325.east.verizon.net |
I just need to know how to put in a black background now
thanks for the advice |
| #27 demon_blade3[125115] |
| dsc05.ivn-ca-1-28.rasserver.net |
| kick ass, #30. as for the black background, ask lucky or sumbody |
#28  [125225] |
| pcp660145pcs.prshng01.fl.comcast.net |
Not a bad start, but write and rewrite it until it looks and sounds good before you post. Also, try not to switch between first, second, and third person POV so much. It's a good literary device, rarely, but otherwise it's just confusing and annoying.
3.0
Cheers,
~CB~ |
| #29 count(blah)blah[125955] |
| 206.251.106.6 |
| it was ok, but to my oponion, i dont like how it s wrote in 3rd person, more details plz |
| #30 pop_killer[129530] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3757066.sympatico.ca |
damnit, no corrects reports in this site... damnit
hey, creator of this report, how the hell you cannot use pictures???
lmfao
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