| #1 DarkLord[126824] |
| gateway.franco-nord.edu.on.ca |
| Hope you all like it |
| #2 IcE-Inforcer[126827] |
| gateway.franco-nord.edu.on.ca |
Heheh gj.
The start is kind of retarded and gets you nowhere... but it all gets better at the end. So people; don't quit after the first paragraph.
And ya... uh.. gj.
Btw: That's the skooh IP. I and DarkLord aren't the same person.
-IcE- |
| #3 2e722[126828] |
| cache211.156ce.scvmaxonline.com.sg |
cant read now,gotta hit the sack and sleep. will do later thou..came here to say...
#3!!!
Peace |
| #4 DarkRider[126831] |
| 198.134.2.2 |
| Interesting |
| #5 Ender[126832] |
| 128.226.37.251 |
| 5th =/ |
| #6 badme[126839] |
| pcp01773918pcs.norstn01.pa.comcast.net |
| IMO, very well done work :) |
| #7 why[126851] |
| pm3d-121.dcn.davis.ca.us |
| are all these fanfics spamming the site? HELP SOS HELP |
| #8 Me[126862] |
| scf1.wc.optusnet.com.au |
| you don't have to read them #8, so y are u complaining? |
| #9 IcE-Inforcer[126865] |
| gateway.franco-nord.edu.on.ca |
| Haha still no serious comments. |
| #10 mulla-the-bum[126879] |
| spider-to062.proxy.aol.com |
| it was a good story but the heart thing kinda killed it |
| #11 CyMaN[126882] |
| p50806FBC.dip.t-dialin.net |
| Well, i think although u base ur story on a quite various vocabulary u are sometimes missing synonyms. another point is that i think through the use of all these words, which seems forced, ur text doesnt flow like it should. On the other hand i agree with #2, which leaves much room for advantage :) |
| #12 Some_idiot[126896] |
| proxy.ia4.marketscore.com |
| This sucked ass. You can't write worth shit and I bet your house is ugly. |
| #13 .[126925] |
| pool-138-89-70-64.mad.east.verizon.net |
It's just some boring stream of consciousness, it seems like you spent little time on. Where you just practicing your typing?
You are not a good writer. Practice writing (in private or school) lots more, and read much much more good writing. I don't want to waste my time again reading your innane ramblings.
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| #14 IcE-Inforcer[126926] |
| gateway.franco-nord.edu.on.ca |
| Umm.... I know him and he read a hell of alot. I mean, too much. He's farsighted and reading is blinding him. Trust me, he a good writer but this idea was stupid. |
| #15 Rhino[126929] |
| 207.80.136.105 |
| I liked it a lot : ] |
| #16 IcE-Inforcer[126959] |
| nor-tcs1-port33.vianet.on.ca |
| Almost a week and still no r8ting? Haha.. |
| #17 Some_God[127005] |
| proxys.or3.marketscore.com |
| This is soo poor it cant afford a rating |
| #18 IcE-Inforcer[127720] |
| gateway.franco-nord.edu.on.ca |
| Haha u suck :D |
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