| #1 Mattkid[136247] |
| 208.181.176.226.lgisp.net |
Read first few lines, it was pretty good.
Matt |
| #2 Mattkid[136248] |
| 208.181.176.226.lgisp.net |
Actually, it was only Ok.
:P
Matt |
| #3 jimmy[136250] |
| 144.139.223.201 |
yeahyeah Whatever.
haha.
-NJ |
| #4 [136274] |
| 12-210-79-86.client.attbi.com |
| gay story. you should kill yourself. sorry for the flame |
| #5 jimmy[136275] |
| 144.139.223.201 |
*whatever*
-NOTJimmy |
| #6 Bladenewbie[136280] |
| tck1-240.interl.net |
Well, let's get down to business:
1)You had the right idea, I guess, but the writing needs a lot of improvement.
2)The spelling and grammar reminded me of my little brother's schoolwork. In other words, needs work :P
3)Watch your capitalization :P
Of course, this is probably just a gag post and I'm just making it worse, but in the event that you are making an effort here... well, keep trying. |
| #7 jimmy[136290] |
| 144.139.223.201 |
Yeah well, Thanks anyway Bn.
-NJ |
| #8 Airplane_steel[136311] |
| dialup-209.244.183.212.Dial1.NewYork2.Level3.net |
| omg this loked great. its not a report! yes! ur so cool. |
| #9 Airpalne_steel[136315] |
| dialup-209.244.183.212.Dial1.NewYork2.Level3.net |
| nvm ur gay ur so gay! i think ur gay. |
| #10 [136325] |
| 12-246-85-28.client.attbi.com |
| fan fics are gay |
| #11 LameJoker[136326] |
| ip-209-23-3-46.modem.logical.net |
#10? TIME?
anyway, hmm, ok job whatever. |
| #12 Bladenewbie[136331] |
| tck1-240.interl.net |
| Keep working, you'll get better. I really have no room to talk, seeing as how I have no html skills at all, and I've never written a BR. |
| #13 jimmy[136346] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
Ya, Airplane is like Time.
Please remove him from the site.
Where the hell are the raters anyway?
-NJ |
| #14 2Cautious[136351] |
| adsl-68-72-102-208.dsl.chcgil.ameritech.net |
OK, certainly an improvement from the last 2! Anyway, the hordes of units were kind of annoying (doesn't really matter, though), not too much character building, obviously, but I dunno if you wanted that. The battles were fairly interesting, but maybe more details on individual parts of the battle would be better (?). Kinda hard considering there were millions of units involved, though.
Not bad! 6.5-7.5 |
| #15 ComicGenius[136367] |
| ip-209-23-3-154.modem.logical.net |
duhhhhhh, hmmf.
Well, just a little side note, nukes are supposed to detonate in midair, they do more damage that way. Every RTS I've played has this little fact wrong, though. If the warhead explodes at ground level, the blast is muffled by clutter. However, if detonated around 400 meters above the target, the shockwave expands uniformly, literally crushing anything below it.
scary what I know... |
| #16 Awesomeplayer[136368] |
| 216.251.71.199 |
yay top 20^^ btw nice fam... err that
dudes if i write a report in spanish... can i get a 10¿? |
| #17 SAbotage[136415] |
| pool-68-161-56-18.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| YEAH MAN UR DOING IT |
| #18 Sabotage[136416] |
| pool-68-161-56-18.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| rofl that airplane guy is funny |
| #19 Sabotage[136417] |
| pool-68-161-56-18.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| Jimmy. gj. the grammar wasn't perfect (i can''''t say i haaave perrrfecvt grammer?) but gj. |
| #20 jimmy[136462] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
Hey Sabotage
Airplane is gay, don't u realise?
-NJ |
| #21 PoachedEggs[136475] |
| CPE0010b5079e12-CM014320107014.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| Next time write a fanfic about my chinesse sized penis. It is will surely give you 2 inc... i mean 10/10 |
| #22 jimmy[136481] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
wtf?
-NJ |
| #23 Sabotage[136497] |
| pool-68-161-56-18.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| heh jimmy ur teh best. keep writing man. |
| #24 jimmy[136509] |
| CWPP-p-203-54-206-63.prem.tmns.net.au |
Yeah thnx ;)
Seriously, how do you view screenshots?
-NJ |
| #25 Sabotage[136554] |
| pool-68-161-56-105.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| print screen, my computers/c:drive/ programfiles/starcraft/screen 00-99 |
| #26 jimmy[136587] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
but how? which program to open them?
-NJ |
| #27 jimmy[136588] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
but how? which program to open them?
Good job on your gold ;)
-NJ |
| #28 jimmy[136814] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
Okay then, I'm last.
-NJimmy |
| #29 sabotage[136890] |
| pool-68-161-58-14.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| hey u need imaging preview. or i think photoshop can open it. |
| #30 Sabotage[136891] |
| pool-68-161-58-14.ny325.east.verizon.net |
when i said: "YEAH MAN UR DOING IT" i was drunk. i mean: yea nice job on fanfic. try sc reporting, but ur fanfics are
pretty good anyways. Wc3=me angry |
| #31 jimmy[136936] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
hehe. I cant make any sc reports. Last. Thanx for the advice!!!!!
-NJ |
| #32 Sabotage[137217] |
| pool-68-161-59-61.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| >:(((( |
| #33 jimmy[137250] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
Veahyeah sabotage. Last.
-NJ |
| #34 Sabotage[137537] |
| pool-68-161-58-160.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| last now.. |
| #35 jimmy[137733] |
| CWPP-p-203-54-207-13.prem.tmns.net.au |
nope
-NJ |
| #36 NotJim[139044] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
| Told you all that I am last. |
| #37 Sabotage[139525] |
| pool-68-161-64-46.ny325.east.verizon.net |
last
oh i play us east
name: Sabotage_ |
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