| #1 LurkerBurger7[137643] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
I hope you guys like it. Its my first report. I just turned 13 and Im a friend of Sabotage's. So go a little easy on me ok?
Im aiming for about a 6 with this BR..maybe a 7. |
| #2 LurkerBurger7[137644] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
and im sorry about the no screen shots thing.
by the way...Zerg~Ling Rules! |
| #3 the-nut[137645] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| ...short |
| #4 FlavorOfYellow[137646] |
| ool-182d2b38.dyn.optonline.net |
"by the way...Zerg~Ling Rules!" nice job sucking up =]
oh well, i would screen shots would help the report. |
| #5 LurkerBurger7[137649] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| I'll give u people a hint. This report is better read than viewed. So dont say anything until u read it. |
| #6 Redemption6[137652] |
| 216-164-223-16.c3-0.lex-ubr3.sbo-lex.ma.cable.rcn.com |
| The report was okay, but there was no detail for the action. I think a 5-6 would do it justice, because for a text-only br (the pics were all irrelevant), there just wasn't enough detail or excitement to be gold. I really liked the design of the missle turret and the bunker (if that was ur design), i dont know how to u did that but it was pretty cool. |
| #7 Eldritch Evil[137654] |
| nr11-216-196-185-60.fuse.net |
Well...
Interesting. There were no actual pictures of the game, but you did put in some obvious effort to find all those concept art/3D models. "Better read than viewed", maybe, maybe not. The writing itself was good, few spelling errors and no grammar mistakes as far as I could tell. But you didn't go into detail very much, if at all. You didn't tell us about the map - what's it look like, expansions, where did you start, ect. Go read some reports by WilliamWC3, Mark4, AQD3(heh), and the other great reporters to see what truly excellent reports look like.
4 |
| #8 Psyonic_Reaver[137655] |
| 2Cust115.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
Agreed with Eldritch. No details at all = Yawn. I massed. He massed. My massed owned his massed gg.
Not very fun. =/ We like excitement! Micro Battles!
If you'd like a basic form of writing to follow read some of Strega~F's *Think thats his name* BR's or mine. But WilliamWC3 and Mark4 do superb jobs, way better then what I could ever do.
4-5 |
| #9 Smegol[137658] |
| 139.134.58.153 |
i agree 7 and 8 u didnt even say if u expanded and u didnt discribe the battles very well
btw that was a shit game u just defended and mass air why didnt u rush or do something exiting
must of been the most boring game ever
ok thou 6 |
| #10 LurkerBurger7[137660] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| srry i know |
| #11 lost[137661] |
| cache-dc05.proxy.aol.com |
There were only two battles, man. If that guy woulda emptied his 5 bunkers, built some medics, and brought a couple tanks along he coulda tank pushed your ass to hell.
Everything above, atleast you had kickass graphics, but one of them was from SCLegacy, did you get permission before you took their images? |
| #12 cristolsord5[137671] |
| ool-182e2756.dyn.optonline.net |
| this is an awesome battle report. i would give it a 10 |
| #13 EldritchEvil[137681] |
| nr11-216-196-184-34.fuse.net |
Okay, I'm moving my rating down a notch. Your ability to spell and use correct grammar obviously does not extend beyond your report, and you using a different name to get ratings - see those IP addresses? - shows your immaturity.
3 |
| #14 LurkerBurger7[137687] |
| ool-182e2756.dyn.optonline.net |
| EldritchEvil-what are u talking about? First of all, I type words like "r" and "u" because its faster. You should not judge a report by its comments,LOL. My "advanced" words like miniscule and immense are used to make my br better. Duh. Who would try to sound like an idiot??? |
| #15 LurkerBurger7[137689] |
| ool-182e2756.dyn.optonline.net |
| by the way eldritch, i thought ur first comment was very accurate, i commend u for it. |
| #16 Andris[137690] |
| cache-ntc-ad01.proxy.aol.com |
| i wish people like you died =[ |
| #17 2Cautious[137691] |
| adsl-68-72-86-64.dsl.chcgil.ameritech.net |
What other people said. Still, I thought it was pretty good.
5.5-6.5 |
| #18 Sabotage[137692] |
| pool-68-161-57-199.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| probably better than mine |
| #19 jimmy[137719] |
| CWPP-p-203-54-207-13.prem.tmns.net.au |
Good good. 6.
-NJ |
| #20 Convider[137747] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3663172.sympatico.ca |
| screenshots... get screenshots! |
| #21 EldritchEvil[137759] |
| nr11-216-196-188-164.fuse.net |
See, this is what bugs me: People use "r" and "u" because they claim it's faster and more efficient. I mean, I can see that in a game of SC or WC3 you need to type fast, but in comments... Are you under some sort of time constraints? Are evil russian commie muslim terrorist ninjas with knives threatening to kill your family if you don't type a comment in 10 seconds? Also:
cristolsord5
ool-182e2756.dyn.optonline.net
this is an awesome battle report. i would give it a 10
LurkerBurger7
ool-182e2756.dyn.optonline.net
Notice the similar IPs.
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| #22 stillphy_chi[137763] |
| cache-dc05.proxy.aol.com |
| good job! its better than brians. Nice pictures from Chin. |
| #23 LurkerBurger7[137764] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| ELdritch- OMG. This is a complete misunderstanding. The IP adresses are similar becuase cristolsord5 is my friend AND LIVES IN THE SAME TOWN AS ME. |
| #24 stillphy_chi[137765] |
| cache-dc05.proxy.aol.com |
| also i forgot to say the-nut is such a newb. He always makes excueses that he has to leave when hes losing. Every time i play him and hes losing he uses his drop hack or just leaves. I think hes to sensitive. Lurkerburger7 good br but add pictures from the replay instead of like the movies. |
| #25 ZeaL[137769] |
| proxys.ord.marketscore.com |
| Agreed |
| #26 ZeaL[137770] |
| proxys.or3.marketscore.com |
| Why do I feel like these 'claimed' 12 year olds try to be annoying and stupid? |
| #27 stillphly_chi[137796] |
| cache-ra01.proxy.aol.com |
| zeal just to tell u we not 12 year olds. |
| #28 LurkerBurger7[137808] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| We're 13 |
| #29 EldritchEvil[137827] |
| nr11-216-196-190-119.fuse.net |
I would believe you but for two things:
1.) They are the EXACT SAME IP address. No difference.
2.) Heard it all before from davy. |
| #30 EldritchEvil[137828] |
| nr11-216-196-190-119.fuse.net |
"I am not Davy i live in the same town of davy and it is called a very good ISP! so don't get bitchy at him thinking im him IM not ill regret this but my icq is 35148232 we are on at the same time(actually im always on)but IM NOT DAVY so dont think i am"
-davy |
| #31 Sabotage[137829] |
| pool-68-161-57-199.ny325.east.verizon.net |
hehe. stillphy_chi stfu. heh. Ok now jeremy, few thingz
1- The missle turret picture was huge
2- I didn't like that you br a game with no ending
3- money map
4- nice vocabulary
5- orange on black= :0
I feel jealous. Your first report got 6.0 but mine got 2.5. ur gonna be better than me later on.
-sabotage |
| #32 Sabotage[137830] |
| pool-68-161-57-199.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| eldritch yo a lot of people have optonline adresses. some have same as me too. |
| #33 jimmy[137847] |
| 144.139.223.1 |
Same here
-NJ |
| #34 Mitre10[137848] |
| 144.139.223.1 |
| HAHAHA JIMMY IS MY NIEGHBOUR HES GAY |
| #35 jimmy[137849] |
| 144.139.223.1 |
Lemme comeover to my house... and bash u
-NJ |
| #36 jimmy[137869] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
HEHEHE. That was sooooooooooooooo funny. Last.
-NJ |
| #37 Losion[137914] |
| 138.227.189.8 |
Nice pics
The colours were nice, contrary to some other bloke opinion.
The BR text was totally lousy but maybe still a good one for the first try.
Stuff i would like to have in a better BR: maps, exps, recon!!!, details about when and where the stuffs were built and so on, things that really gives you a feeling that this is a strategy game..
Noone cares but i wouldn't give this as high as six points.
Noone cares but this is a comment section not a chat line.
Noone cares but i would like to see more strategy comments here
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| #38 jimmy[137960] |
| 144.139.221.171 |
| Right. |
| #39 Newt[138001] |
| dsl3-63-249-85-66.cruzio.com |
That report was pretty good for your first. On future reports focus on using better detail though. I like you color scheme. It reminded me of games like Space Invaders or Asteroids.
~Newt
P.S. Take the "a" off of asteroids and you have a sport enhancing drug! WHOOHOO!! |
| #40 LurkerBurger7[138011] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
lol
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| #41 hidden[138048] |
| 165.209-200-80.adsl.skynet.be |
just one question, why didnt you take screens...
cuz u didnt know how or just 4got ?
just wanna know cuz reps that have no screens are easly not looked at... I for one just read it cuz it had those cewl conceptarts =)
maybe a combo of the 2 might get you somewhere ;)
hidden, |
| #42 Notjim[138093] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
| xactly lurk |
#43  [138349] |
| dialup-64.152.169.242.Dial1.NewYork1.Level3.net |
| Well, lurkerburger, I'm not going to rate it, but I say get a better game! |
| #44 LurkerBurger7[138374] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
Hidden, I didn't forget to put in screenshots or anything, I just didn't have Adobe Photoshop....but now I do.
So on my next BR, i WILL have screenshots and i WILL try some combos
~Promise~ |
| #45 the-nut[138400] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| i have adobe too! |
| #46 LurkerBurger7[138730] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| eldritch-those 2 ip adresses were NOT the same. dude, are you blind? |
| #47 ja83[138858] |
| 078.205-93-216-nokia-dsl.dhcp.surewest.net |
Decent report, but needs a few ingame screenshots and a little more detail for battles.
I say it's a 7.5 |
| #48 Sabo[139832] |
| pool-68-161-64-46.ny325.east.verizon.net |
laster
and not 7.5 you fool. |
| #49 LurkerBurger7[141068] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| lastest:) |
| #50 sabotage[144336] |
| pool-68-161-53-191.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| Shmlast |
| #51 LurkerBurger7[144492] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| lastiest of the last |
| #52 omg.z.gmo[166237] |
| 209-6-247-76.c3-0.nwt-ubr1.sbo-nwt.ma.cable.rcn.com |
| yep |
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