| #1 haribo[139251] |
| ip24-136-52-245.ga.at.cox.net |
| yay for pot and girl. first :) |
| #2 SpiCeTigeR[139256] |
| 029.a.001.hob.iprimus.net.au |
i hate the guy who wrote this even more than ScoTtT. |
| #3 ZerG~LinG[139260] |
| p412-049.ppp.get2net.dk |
#2: Hey be more of a jerk.
I dunno what it is about these kind of stories I like but and I don't really know what to comment so I'll go with:
3rd
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| #4 LurkerBurger7[139262] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| hmmm I think ScoTtT was worse |
| #5 FlavorOfYellow[139270] |
| ool-182d2b38.dyn.optonline.net |
| interesting |
| #6 The0ne[139271] |
| redback-80.shoreham.net |
Dude, way to pull through!
I hope your life gets better and better as life goes on.
-The0ne |
| #7 EldritchEvil[139272] |
| nr11-216-196-184-133.fuse.net |
| ^_- |
| #8 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[139279] |
| 130.94.107.134 |
| That's quite a story Mr. Jackass, I MEAN, Brogan. So I'll just type it up on my invisible typewriter! lalalalalalalala....fruit cake. |
| #9 SiG.[139281] |
| adsl-211-205-153.mia.bellsouth.net |
lol.
This sort of reminds me of a book called <i>The Perks of Being a Wallflower</i>.
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| #10 Convider[139282] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3660932.sympatico.ca |
| that was... interesting |
| #11 ifUwontsayitTHENIWILL[139288] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
THAT WAS FUCKING GARBAGE if it was fake, but if it is real, im sorry for your loss.
I know how it is to lose some one you care about, my uncle died in a car crash, after drinking. |
| #12 2Cautious[139303] |
| adsl-68-72-110-125.dsl.chcgil.ameritech.net |
| I dunno... wasn't bad fundementaly, but just not really any details. Hum... maybe that's not it... didn't feel like life (to me). & I didn't really like the end. =/ |
| #13 2Cautious[139304] |
| adsl-68-72-110-125.dsl.chcgil.ameritech.net |
| P.S. Ignore the flamers |
| #14 [139309] |
| 219.94.100.225 |
| It was boring -_- |
| #15 LameJoker[139312] |
| pool-129-44-10-154.alb.east.verizon.net |
Interesting, but one note: you say you were not a "pervert" in 9th grade, and became one (to your dismay) in 10th. This is simply part of the process of growing up (for boys). Practically without fail, every male child does what you described, aka looking at some porn and wackin it. Its not your fault, its just nature.
My definition of "pervert" would be if someone took their fantasies too far, and acted them out in the real world. That is because their sense of distinction between fantasy and reality would be totally skewed, hence, "perverted". |
| #16 LameJoker[139313] |
| pool-129-44-10-154.alb.east.verizon.net |
PS the word pervert just means twisted around. It doesn't specifically mean anything sexual.
AND NO, I am not obsessed! |
| #17 LurkerBurger7[139356] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
lol
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| #18 Ender[139358] |
| 128.226.160.86 |
| i'm obsessed.. T.T |
#19  [139370] |
| 12-222-57-81.client.insightBB.com |
I hated this. It really sucked. The only part that made me laugh was the following quote:
"... and most of all, I hated masturbation. All my friends did it, and I did it a few times, and always hated myself after I was done and covered in my own semen. I felt so dirty, and so weak."
Too bad about George but my God, I don't come to this site to read the pointless rambling drivel of angst filled teens. |
| #20 RubiksCube[139373] |
| pD958B99A.dip.t-dialin.net |
Oh, you don't Dref?
Tell me what your "When two world's collide" story is all about then?
I mean, ok it doesnt have quiete as much to do with Video Games then your story, but....
...while I was reading I memorized that exact story, then I go to comment and you post of how much you hated it. Give him a break.
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| #21 [139374] |
| cache-mtc-aa01.proxy.aol.com |
| Drefsab wouldn't know good writing if it bit him in the @$$! |
| #22 striz[139395] |
| CPE000476b83a92-CM013050003852.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
yeah man, Dref *would* pick up on good writing, it's just his opinion. check out his fics.
I enjoyed it, but thought it was out of place. on the other hand, it was a good read. and I agree with you about the 'media drone' thoughts. amen.
if it's true, I hope it gets better. if not, you need to work on your creative writing. |
| #23 BlueRibbon[139425] |
| host4.mvsd.com |
Hurray for th chick. Other than that.... ;[
Drefsab had the best quote already listed, and that is pretty good ;].
But the chick just held it all together ;o.
3 |
| #24 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[139459] |
| 168.143.123.67 |
Confession: I wrote this BR and its all lies. But its entertaining lies, and in the end, isnt that the real truth?
Also, the girl in the pic is from buffy the vampire slayer. hubba hubba. |
| #25 Sabotage[139462] |
| pool-68-161-64-46.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| Who else but our one and only time? |
| #26 NotJim[139709] |
| 144.139.221.1 |
Who else?
Who else but the faggot?
Who else but the asshole?
Who else but TIME?
And this wasn't actually bad, if you look at this logically. |
| #27 Sabotage[139798] |
| pool-68-161-64-46.ny325.east.verizon.net |
heh. I actually read it. It was alright..
but it was stupid. |
| #28 SABOTAGE[139840] |
| pool-68-161-64-46.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| WHY A SIX! |
| #29 lame[140343] |
| 163.248.164.102 |
| WTF? were you stoned when you wrote this? |
| #30 el_sux0r[140484] |
| epsl-302.umd.edu |
IMHO, this went down like a three year old trying to explain quantum chemistry. It's not that the author should be mocked for it, just that at this point in time he is clearly unable to tell the story effectively.
I'll reserve further comment for later, when the truth of the matter is cleared up somewhat. |
| #31 Sabotage[143490] |
| pool-68-161-122-19.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| lol time. |
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