| #1 BlueRiBBon[145957] |
| 65.167.44.67 |
STARCRAFT YET AGAIN! Hurray!
Somehow I managed to make about 2 megs of pictures so um yeah have fun modem users :D |
| #2 lethalducky[145958] |
| pool-141-156-171-59.esr.east.verizon.net |
| nice :) |
| #3 LuckyNewbie:P[145959] |
| 12-252-246-40.client.attbi.com |
Learn how to align pictures (referring to the scores)
Oh, and nice job putting huge letters over the picture of the map... it's like headline news or something in that anything useful is very hard to see
other than that it was okay |
| #4 BlueRiBBon[145960] |
| 65.167.44.67 |
| Its not really that hard to see Lucky, besides I explained the map anyways. bases at every third number on the clock thirds inside down the ramp naturals in the corners bridges! It's not really as bad as you make it sounds :D |
#5  [145961] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
nice br ;)
However, you have some stuff to learn about pictures! Your pics generally show good potential, but try to have one big image showing the entire battle as opposed to about 9, each of which reveal very little. Even a collage with two big images showing alot is generally a hundred times better than a collage with 9 little pictures.
Furthermore, though your writing isnt bad I caught some things that could be improved.
Overall, a good br. The pictures in particular drove down the score, but it's still an 8. gw! |
| #6 Shuriken[145963] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
another black and white own
didnt like the teal text tho man
gj |
| #7 Psyonic_Reaver[145964] |
| 0-1pool14-12.nas6.portland1.or.us.da.qwest.net |
Lots of typo's. Need to get some proofreaders. *Or Microsoft Word =/*
And I agree with Dag on the pictures.
8 |
| #8 BlueRiBBon[145966] |
| hlst-216-37-159-184.ppp.hlst.epix.net |
| I use word -_- |
| #9 Chris[145968] |
| astound-64-85-237-118.ca.astound.net |
8.5
I just saw the girl. :/ |
| #10 Smeagol[145969] |
| 115.a.003.hob.iprimus.net.au |
heh words a microsoft piece of shit :p
down with microsoft!!!!!!!!!!!
nice br btw and u trully are teh new br ho!
oh and wc3>sc :d br on wc3 wayyy prettier pics and more intresting battles
that should get some responses
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| #11 mick[145972] |
| 1Cust212.tnt12.bne1.da.uu.net |
the two toss portraits were misleading, not to mention the title but I don't care.
gw |
| #12 badme[145973] |
| pcp05314420pcs.norstn01.pa.comcast.net |
Excellent
9 |
| #13 ZeaL[145975] |
| sdn-ap-029tnnashP0423.dialsprint.net |
GJ BlueRibbon
-ProXy[cF] |
| #14 [145977] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
oh, btw . . . *whose
:D |
| #15 TIMEisnotonYOURSIDE[145979] |
| 24-56-215-056.mdmmi.voyager.net |
| I thought it was shit. I give it a 2 |
| #16 IcE-Inforcer[145980] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3906633.sympatico.ca |
Those are MY fucking quotes fucker!
Jk... most of em' were in an old report of mine >=D.
-IcE- |
| #17 kane[145982] |
| 12-233-189-122.client.attbi.com |
| i'm not reading a report with a misspelled title |
| #18 TheAngel[145983] |
| theangel.rh.rit.edu |
| "whose" |
#19  [145986] |
| ustlnx19-n2.ust.hk |
| redundent school of redundancy |
| #20 Cappy[145991] |
| 38cust231.zeecon.com |
| Good report. Awesome game. You had a few grammar mistakes like using the word "well" when you meant "while," but they were few and didn't detract from the overall br goodness. This is the type of game all br's should be none of. |
| #21 Slotham[145992] |
| euryale.its.adfa.edu.au |
I think your strong point is the way you describe the battles. But as numerous others have said your grammer needs some work and the pics, although large and well thought out, looked a little scrappy.
LN:P point is quite valid, what's the use in having a lot of little pics showing the battle if most of the image is taken over by a large number. Dagomar is also right, I try to keep the number of images in a collage down. The greater the number of pictures in a collage the more time you have to spend thinking about the layout and this means more time making the image. But there is also a greater risk that it won't work out and it won't add ratings to your report.
If you need a proofreader/critic before you post your next report give me a yell. |
| #22 BlueRiBBon[145994] |
| 65.167.44.68 |
| Thanks Slotham, and everyone else. |
| #23 rigbieys[146000] |
| bbcache-13.singnet.com.sg |
| didn't read it...last erotic pic put me off. |
| #24 Cappy[146005] |
| 38cust231.zeecon.com |
| rig, if you went to the bottom of the post without reading it you obviously weren't going to read it in the first place. stfu, k thanx. |
| #25 IcE-Inforcer[146007] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3906217.sympatico.ca |
| Wow look at all these bootiful gold reports. Ima have to take part in this now.. |
| #26 LuckyNewbie:P[146008] |
| 12-252-246-40.client.attbi.com |
*ruin the streak
:D |
| #27 Smeagol[146012] |
| weld.nt.tas.gov.au |
| comon ice u havent reported in like 5 mths :p |
| #28 [146013] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
one of my friends is obsessed with Evanescence.
that is all. |
| #29 rigbieys[146015] |
| bbcache-13.singnet.com.sg |
| U know why, cappy? I always know whats in store fer me whenever I click on a ribbon production. |
| #30 BlueRiBBon[146016] |
| 65.167.44.88 |
| geart graemaer adn preceft pcifutres rhgit? |
| #31 rigbieys[146024] |
| bbcache-11.singnet.com.sg |
y3s rbbion yu ar corek.
rgiebys |
| #32 iNsOm[146084] |
| evrtwa1-ar16-4-40-005-067.evrtwa1.dsl-verizon.net |
| put two spaces between sentences. looks a lot better than your last one :) although the giraffe comments i didn't like. |
| #33 iNsOm[146086] |
| evrtwa1-ar16-4-40-005-067.evrtwa1.dsl-verizon.net |
| finished reading...you quoted Green Day wrong...it's breaking, not lazy :P |
| #34 Cod[146091] |
| idslppp252.sttl.uswest.net |
| I think you need to learn to spell you fucking idiot. "Who is lightning will strike first" |
| #35 Pablo[146107] |
| sdn-ap-003caburbP0085.dialsprint.net |
| yeah, the error in the title made me think this was a waste of time. And, in the end, I was right. |
| #36 el_sux0r[146981] |
| dhcp078132.res-hall.northwestern.edu |
| A very nice game that could have gone either way. Good choice of games. |
| #37 BlueRibbon[147012] |
| host12.mvsd.com |
| The game was the only nice thing about this report :D |
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