| #1 Convider[157995] |
| HSE-Toronto-ppp304966.sympatico.ca |
first!
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| #2 dodopout[157996] |
| d199-126-42-193.abhsia.telus.net |
| second? wonder what the report'll be like >.< |
| #3 Iron Warrior[157999] |
| host46-186.pool8252.interbusiness.it |
| WARRGHHH...Third |
| #4 dustbiter[158000] |
| bb220-255-75-197.singnet.com.sg |
| Weird, its mostly about frozen guns/stuff. Odd how easily the equipment fails when technology is so advanced. |
| #5 Timid[158001] |
| cpe-24-30-184-75.socal.res.rr.com |
| such a weird report |
| #6 Terranred[158002] |
| pool-70-111-83-142.nwrk.east.verizon.net |
| Is this a fanfic? |
| #7 Iron Warrior[158003] |
| host153-251.pool8254.interbusiness.it |
| Writing sucked....Pictures sucked (lol)...Write something good, or nothing at all. |
| #8 [158004] |
| 61.52-136-217.adsl.skynet.be |
"Pictures sucked (lol)"
Your humor is to good for our mortal souls... I almost fell off my chair laughing... Please, wait no longer and go on tour, you must enlighten us with your pure genious.
... I hear Greenland is nice this time of year... |
| #9 BeRzErKeR[158006] |
| 216.49.74.174 |
| Not really an entertaining read. I mean, who wants to hear a captain raving at his men about how they're all gonna die? <3 |
| #10 dodopout[158007] |
| d199-126-42-193.abhsia.telus.net |
| my thoughts too... |
| #11 Convider[158008] |
| HSE-Toronto-ppp304966.sympatico.ca |
I liked it. A bit bizzare though.
6.5 |
| #12 Iron Warrior[158009] |
| host84-254.pool8254.interbusiness.it |
| wtf? A 6.5? Mine last report had pictures, a decent story (I thought), and I get a 5? Anyway, thank you no name for your support. |
| #13 SuingForDamages[158010] |
| c-24-60-162-176.hsd1.ma.comcast.net |
I thought it was funny.
6 |
| #14 RabidMurloc[158012] |
| cache-mtc-aa01.proxy.aol.com |
Holy crap, this was funny. You make bad language good.
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Did he spot you?" asked the captain, almost worriedly.
"No, sir, I got myself well camoflauged."
The ghost kept on spying through the highpowered lenses. "He's pointing at something in my direction... I'd turn around and try to see what he's pointing at, sir, but I'd miss what he's saying."
"Well what's happening now?"
"He's saying, 'Kill that fucking bastard ghost up there now'," Rob said. "I wonder what bastard ghost he's talking about. There ain't no one here but me..."
The radio suddenly went dead.
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"Well you knew the time would come to this," Jack said, pacing in front of the marines, "if you didn't know you wouldn't have signed up for the army in the first place, would you have?"
"Sir, a comment to make, sir!"
"Permission granted."
"None of us signed up for this, sir. It was conscription, sir."
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I'm in a good mood becuase I just saw Sahara. Holy Mother of Kil'jaeden, that movie is awesome.
*truck with mounted machine gun is shooting at the boat*
Guy #1: (I forget the names) Get the flare gun!
Guy #2: What, call for help?
Guy #1: No, shoot him!
hehe
Anyway, cant wait for the next episode!
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| #15 dustbiter[158020] |
| bbcache-111.singnet.com.sg |
| I realised the world is good to Murloc. |
#16 [158092] |
| 12-210-242-201.client.insightBB.com |
| The idea was kind of funny and I give you one bonus point for the ironic avalanche twist. However, the execution was pretty bad, especially the dialogue which was virtually unreadable. |
| #17 RabidMurloc[158100] |
| ool-4354698b.dyn.optonline.net |
Yes, the world is pretty good to me. but then again, all I need to be happy is ascess to my drug of choice (WoW) and a bag of potato chips.
:P |
| #18 Spike[158149] |
| CPE00a065cb0ceb-CM0012c99f036c.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
#17, thanks for that (no sarcasm).
Any suggestions to improve? |