| #1 UpgradedKakaru (d097.paris-59.cybercable.fr)[9544] |
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| Weee first comment. Mark4 why are you so mean to me? i just have fun clicking on banners to feed ur children....take it easy dude |
| #2 Fractal_Wave (proxy4.gvcl1.bc.home.com)[9573] |
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~ahem~
Firstly: really damn cool name
Secondly: really damn cool report.
All the best,
Fractal_Wave |
| #3 Warbringer187 (spider-tq012.proxy.aol.com)[9593] |
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Great report just some pics would be nice
I give it a 7.5
Warbringer187 |
| #4 <img "http://www.angelfire.com/sc2/SuperGeneral/images/SuperGeneral.jpg"></i[9652] |
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| Wicked report. I thought the game would be closer to an hour. Nice description. Damn I wish I didn't suck. |
| #5 Mr. Merf (dial-up247.twistedpair.net)[9659] |
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Very well done, but....
(I hate being a bad guy...)
Little things tend to bug me. And these really are LITTLE things, but they soured a lot of the enjoyment of a well-played game for me. Things like the way you tended to use the same turns of phrase several times in rapid succession, and then do it again. (In a short BR, no one would notice this, but you seemed to run out of words to use=P) A much more unimportant thing was the profusion of typos. Rereading it once would have eliminated this.
On the whole, excellent BR. The nit- picking details seemed to hurt it, though. |